Talk:Ontario Highway 38/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 17:29, 5 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's it, on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 20:01, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "by locals.[3]" why only one sentence in the lead cited? Should be in the main body too (and expanded upon if possible) so cite it there.
 * You usually say how long it is in the lead.
 * "was decommissioned in 1996.[citation needed]" speaks for itself...
 * "The route of Highway 38 in 1997 began" why in 1997?
 * "the Trans-Canada Trail, an" our article doesn't hyphenate this.
 * However, "an all season hiking" all-season here needs to be hyphenated.
 * "travels through Hartington" link Hartington first time.
 * "route meandering around" meanders.
 * "an all girls overnight " I would hyphenate all girls here as it's being used as an adjective.
 * "assumed the 76.0 km" sorry, what do you mean?
 * "Following World War 2" II
 * "the Ministry of Transportation of Ontario.[21] " overlinked.
 * Ref 1 & 2 & 5 & 13 & 28 spaced hyphen should be en-dash.
 * Frontenac News should be a work.
 * C.P. Robins -> C. P. Robins.
 * Ref 17, ELLIPSIS needs a non-breaking space before it in this use.
 * Kingston Whig is a newspaper too.
 * Second external link needs an en-dash.
 * Fixes made, except the overlink to the MTO above the intersection list. As for why 1997, that was the last year it existed as a provincial highway. This has been one of those things where I'm not sure how to best describe the route: from a contemporary standpoint or from a present standpoint? Also, I'm very surprised we don't have an article for route assumption. -  Floydian  τ ¢ 01:52, 7 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Understood, it's certainly good enough for GA so I'm happy to promote. I'll see if I can find another of yours to do!  Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 08:35, 9 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I very much appreciate it, doubly so your repeated reviews of my submissions; I know that I'm getting thorough inspections from you! Hopefully the next one has less of my perennial issues. :) --  Floydian  τ ¢ 04:04, 10 May 2021 (UTC)