Talk:Open Government Initiative

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 August 2019 and 4 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Shrino. Peer reviewers: Erikabucb, Jameswang323, Berkeleynicholas, Melissawwang, Maschristi.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 05:43, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

whitehouse.gov removal?
Is it worth noting that the whitehouse.gov page for the Open Government Directive has been removed? Several government websites, including the Secret Service, still link to this URL. (I have no idea if this was a specific removal or part of a blanket removal to references of all of the previous administration's executive actions and initiatives.) -184.97.177.52 (talk) 11:03, 23 February 2017 (UTC)

Possible sources for adding to the article
https://obamawhitehouse.archives.gov/open

https://www.state.gov/open-government-initiative/

https://fas.org/sgp/crs/secrecy/R41361.pdf

http://eds.a.ebscohost.com.libproxy.berkeley.edu/eds/detail/detail?vid=2&sid=3adb1dcf-66de-442c-a668-2f4a725f84d5%40sessionmgr4007&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWRzLWxpdmU%3d#AN=S2214790X17302009&db=edselp

http://eds.a.ebscohost.com.libproxy.berkeley.edu/eds/detail/detail?vid=6&sid=3adb1dcf-66de-442c-a668-2f4a725f84d5%40sessionmgr4007&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWRzLWxpdmU%3d#AN=S0962629817302184&db=edselp

I would love to get your feedback if these are sources that fit with Wikipedia's guidelines! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shrino (talk • contribs) 06:37, 2 October 2019 (UTC)

Feedback on Article from Christina Masnyy
The sources and layout for this is off to a good start as far as sources and citations. The introduction is rather short. When I wrote mine, I tried to make my introduction a layout of what the rest of the page would follow. Adding more information to the intro will create a better layout and understanding of the topic you are writing about. 2607:F140:6000:16:C8AC:5D37:5F27:523D (talk) 17:29, 28 October 2019 (UTC) Christina Masnyy