Talk:Operation All Clear

A couple of suggestions
G'day, good work on improving this article. I don't have time at the moment to do a GA review on this, unfortunately, as I am in the process of moving but I have a couple of suggestions that might help you:

Anyway, good luck taking the article further. Thanks for your hard work so far. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 01:27, 2 January 2015 (UTC)
 * the lead is currently very short, but for a GA it should probably be expanded a bit. I'd suggest at least two paragraphs that fully summarise the article;
 * the writing style is very repetitious, with many sentences and paragraphs starting in a similar way. For a GA, I would like to see more variation in language so that there is a distinct narrative flow. There are also many single sentence or very short paragraphs that probably should be merged
 * the infobox mentions strengths and casualty figures, I'd suggest working these also into the body of the article where possible
 * "Facing continuous pressure, Assamese militants relocated their camps in Bhutan" --> should this read: "Facing continuous pressure, Assamese militants relocated their camps to Bhutan"?
 * the link between the first and second paragraphs on the background section should be highlighted a bit more clearly, as it doesn't seem clear to the casual reader who the ULFA and NDFB were.
 * "KLO had also been allegedly involved" --> probably best here to attribute the allegation in text. For instance, "According to X, the KLO had also..."
 * in the footnotes, per WP:ALLCAPS you should avoid using all capital letters;
 * "In a follow-up action to the operation, 22 Bhutanese civilians were found guilty of aiding the separatists ..." when was this?
 * "...facing trial on similar charges as of July 2004" --> what has happened since 2004? Were they convicted?
 * the Operation section currently doesn't give a very clear picture of what actually happened on the ground. For instance, "The army seized ULFA’s central command headquarters located at Phukatong in Samdrup Jongkhar" --> how did they do this, what tactics did they use, how many personnel took part in the attack, etc.
 * the list in the Aftermath probably should have a suitable introductory stem sentence added. For instance, "Over the period, several incidents took place including:..."
 * I suggest checking that all the sources satisfy the requirements of WP:RS. I haven't checked them myself, but the appearance of Wikileaks concerned me (I don't know if it is considered a reliable source, but I would never use it personally). Perhaps you could confirm them at the WP:Reliable source noticeboard?
 * I'd probably swap the two images around, moving the map to the body, and the photograph to the infobox. If there was a photo of the soldiers undertaking the operation, or something similar, that would also be a good inclusion (although it is likely going to be very hard to find);

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