Talk:Operation Aquatint/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk) 06:59, 11 September 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
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 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
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 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
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 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
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 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
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Comment
 * 1) Having read the article a few times, I finally realised that Hollings and Orr are missing. (I know, I could have discovered that reading the Discussion.) It says in the intro that the fate of the other two is uncertain. Could this be stated in the article as well?
 * 2) Any idea where the final resting places of the dead are? Is there a memorial or a marker to the raid?

Cheers Hawkeye7 (talk) 06:59, 11 September 2010 (UTC) Thanks for the review. --Jim Sweeney (talk) 08:18, 11 September 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) The fate of Hollings and Orr has never been established added to the aftermath section.
 * 2) The three killed in the raid were buried in the St-Laurent-sur-Mer cemetery on 15 September 1942 (in the aftermath section). Hayes will have been buried in a unmarked grave in the prison which was normal practise from other reading but would be OR to include as its not confirmed anywhere.