Talk:Operation Black Buck/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Auntieruth55 (talk · contribs) 15:04, 11 June 2018 (UTC)


 * I'll start this in the next few days. Cheers, auntieruth (talk) 15:04, 11 June 2018 (UTC)
 * In lead, you've got extremely and huge. I'd change huge to daunting....and take out extremely? or use a word that is not as puffed?
 * Changed "huge" to "daunting"  Hawkeye7   (discuss)  23:07, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Second Para of Black Buck One: the seal perished?  how about the seal failed?
 * When talking about rubber, "perish" means the deterioration caused by aging.  Hawkeye7   (discuss)  23:07, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
 * ...bombing handed over to the control system. The attack was delivered around 0700Z. ? what handed bombing over?
 * I meant that control was handed over to the automated system. Changed to "automated bombing control system system was engaged"  Hawkeye7   (discuss)  23:07, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
 * defeated radars controlling the defending ... plural on radars?
 * Correct. Changed to "defeated the radar systems controlling the defending Skyguard anti-aircraft cannons."  Hawkeye7   (discuss)  23:07, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
 * ...the Argentine...wrongly assessed.... incorrectly assessed?
 * Er, sure. Changed.  Hawkeye7   (discuss)  23:07, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
 * let me know! Cheers, auntieruth (talk) 15:11, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
 * thanks...I think some of this is the difference in Aussie-speak and Yank-speak. ;)
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * NICE!
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * NICE!
 * NICE!