Talk:Operation Golden Fleece/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sawyer-mcdonell (talk · contribs) 19:30, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
 * @Catlemur Excited to review this, as I have a strong interest in the Caucasus region, and we're lacking in good coverage of the breakaway states in particular. Thanks for your nomination! I aim to have actionable feedback within a few days. Let me know if you have any questions or comments. :) sawyer  * he/they *  talk  20:20, 1 March 2024 (UTC)

Initial review

 * note: I did some copyediting for clarity & ease of reading.
 * note: I did some copyediting for clarity & ease of reading.


 * I can't access the majority of the sources, whether due to them being offline or in Greek (which I can't read), but the ones I could access and/or machine-translate match to the article well. All of them seem quite reliable, however if you take this article to FAC, the reviewers there may take issue with the use of a PhD thesis as a major source; they're far stricter about that kind of thing than at GAN.
 * haven't found anything of concern.
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 * haven't found anything of concern.
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 * On 27 September 1993, Sukhumi was captured by the Abkhazians, leading to many civilian casualties; including victims from the Greek minority. "captured" here is wikilinked to Ethnic cleansing of Georgians in Sukhumi - from what I can tell, there's no standalone article on the capture of Sukhumi itself, only the article on the related ethnic cleansing, which I'm not sure is strictly relevant to this article. The wikilink could be considered somewhat of a WP:EGG, and I think it could be reworded for clarity & NPOV, or even just de-linked.
 * I delinked it. Thank you for the review, if there is anything else that needs to be addressed let me know.--Catlemur (talk) 10:40, 2 March 2024 (UTC)

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 * (not a requirement for GA, just a suggestion) I quite like the ancient depiction of Jason and the Golden Fleece illustrating the article, however I'm unsure as to whether it should be in the infobox, since it's more of a background information illustration than directly relevant to the article. I have to assume that there aren't many relevant Commons images to use for this article, but I think perhaps the picture could just be moved out of the infobox and the infobox left unillustrated. Let me know what you think!
 * I move the Golden Fleece illustration to the background section.--Catlemur (talk) 10:40, 2 March 2024 (UTC)
 * @Catlemur I've got my initial review + comments done; overall it's a solid article! I'll continue looking through it in case I catch anything new or have any other comments/questions. Ping me whenever you've got a chance to review my review! :) sawyer  * he/they *  talk  01:10, 2 March 2024 (UTC)
 * @Catlemur everything looks excellent now. Thanks for writing a very interesting article, and congratulations :) sawyer  * he/they *  talk  00:02, 3 March 2024 (UTC)
 * @Catlemur I've got my initial review + comments done; overall it's a solid article! I'll continue looking through it in case I catch anything new or have any other comments/questions. Ping me whenever you've got a chance to review my review! :) sawyer  * he/they *  talk  01:10, 2 March 2024 (UTC)
 * @Catlemur everything looks excellent now. Thanks for writing a very interesting article, and congratulations :) sawyer  * he/they *  talk  00:02, 3 March 2024 (UTC)