Talk:Operation Hurricane/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 23:01, 24 February 2017 (UTC)

That's me done. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 23:34, 24 February 2017 (UTC) This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, and is illustrated by appropriately license images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 01:58, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Monte Bello Islands is overlinked in the lead, Lancashire is also overlinked in the body, as is Special Relationship
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
 * The 1948 modus vivendi is mentioned, but what was it, and why did it include Canada?
 * ✅ Due to the wartime Quebec Agreement. Added a bit about this. Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
 * worth stating that the Monte Bello Islands were uninhabited at first mention, and stating how far off the WA coast they are
 * ✅ Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
 * suggest On 26 February 1952, Churchill announced in the House of Commons that the first British atomic bomb test would occur in Australia before the end of the year.
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
 * it would be useful to give the distances between the islands mentioned, particularly between Hermite Island and HMS Plym
 * pannaces should be pinnaces
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
 * add OCLC for Semaphore 223432572
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Were there further tests on the Monte Bello Islands? I'd expect a mention if so, or an indication of where subsequent British tests were conducted
 * ✅ Yes, there was another test series in 1956. Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
 * The current day impact on the Monte Bello Islands in terms of still being radioactive/a prohibited area etc should probably be mentioned.
 * ✅ They're not a prohibited area. You can visit them. Added a bit about this. Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
 * All the images need a PD-US tag
 * ✅ Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
 * I think that does it. Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:11, 25 February 2017 (UTC)