Talk:Operation Nordseetour/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:22, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 13:19, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Article title should italicise Nordseetour, suggest.
 * I was wondering how to do that - thanks, and done Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "with heavy cruiser seeking" cruisers? or "with the heavy cruiser"?
 * 'The' - added Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "in France, Admiral" that link for France is far too much of an easter egg.
 * True, tweaked Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "when she attacked on the morning of 25 December." she attacked the following morning.
 * "later on 25 December, and" later that day.
 * Done Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "arrived in Brest two days later" -> arrived in Brest on 27 December.
 * Done Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "The British Royal Navy strengthened" no need for British.
 * Removed Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * WS5A or WS 5A?
 * WS 5A, fixed
 * "The Kriegsmarine's (German Navy's) plans" -> "The plans of the Kriegsmarine (German Navy)"
 * Tweaked along those lines Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "Submarines and" U-Boats?
 * Same thing really, so I've deliberately not used 'U-boat's
 * "The British Royal Navy anticipated" no need for British.
 * Done Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "in April 1939. In February 1940" repetitive. Perhaps "The following February"?
 * Oops, tweaked Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "fatally damaged" can fatally damage something that's not alive? Maybe critically damaged?
 * Done Nick-D (talk)
 * "the Home Fleet during" what's that?
 * Tweaked Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "German air force" you had Germany Navy so I assume this should be German Air Force
 * Yep, adjusted Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Kriegsmarine's -> Kriegsmarine
 * Fixed, I think Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "German: "North Sea Tour" German is overlinked. Template should give you instruction on how to force it to delink.
 * Fixed Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "failed to understand that" interpret perhaps?
 * Tweaked Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Why link Malta but not Greenland?
 * Unlinked Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "The carriers" link.
 * Oops, I thought I already had linked aircraft carriers - fixed, and improved the wording Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "Hipper's secondary armament fired" overlinked.
 * Fixed Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "them.[31][20]" ref order.
 * Fixed Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "December Admiral Hipper's" comma after Dec.
 * Done Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Roskill ref needs en-dash in year range.
 * And Steury (spaced en-dash).
 * And Wragg.
 * All done Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot for this review. Nick-D (talk) 04:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)