Talk:Operation Oyster

CE
Altered biblio format to make the sfns work, added isbns, altered them to isbn 13 and hyphenated; Multi-authored works now name1|name2|name3| harv format. Once source not isbn'd as I can't find it, apols. Regards Keith-264 (talk) 07:41, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Gleaned some detail from the RAF BC OH, operational code names aren't apostrophe'd; rm from Oyster. The raid section might benefit from some 3rd level headers to break up the text, when you do the finishing touches. Regards Keith-264 (talk) 11:00, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Very good. I will take a look at what you did there so I can clean it up for next time. Thanks for the help. Gunbirddriver (talk) 17:26, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
 * 'Twas a pleasure. Regards Keith-264 (talk) 21:29, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Had a stab at breaking up slabs of text with sub-headers and pics, all suggestive, rv as desired. Keith-264 (talk) 12:10, 20 May 2018 (UTC)

CE
Tidied prose, gave precedence to literary works, shortened sfns auto ed, cite repair, checked for dupe wl etc. Keith-264 (talk) 16:12, 30 January 2020 (UTC)

casualties
"Civilian casualties were 150 and 7 German soldiers" German soldiers count as civilians? Wouldn't this be better as "casualties numbered seven German soldiers and 150 civilians" ? 84.215.194.30 (talk) 22:36, 30 October 2022 (UTC)