Talk:Operation Rainfall/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: IDV (talk · contribs) 13:55, 29 November 2016 (UTC)

Looks interesting, I'll take this one.--IDVtalk 13:55, 29 November 2016 (UTC)

Lead/infobox

 * Link localization to Video game localization
 * Nintendo should be linked on its first mention, not its second
 * That logo image is really low quality - this isn't a GA criteria, but you should replace it with the one from the Oprainfall website.

History

 * Nintendo stated that their work on Kirby's Epic Yarn and titles for the new Nintendo 3DS, The Last Story was too much effort. I think I understand what you're getting at (they had their plates full already?) but I don't think this sentence works. It probably needs a "with" or "due to"
 * , but the company's American branch "the company" would refer to "Nintendo of Europe" here, which isn't what's meant.

Public reaction

 * Link Xenogears, Xenosaga, Nintendo Life and Mother (series)
 * An an interview In

Comments
A really neat article, and about a subject I find very interesting. I noted some minor issues above; if you address them within a week, I'll promote the article to GA. Also... while not part of the GA criteria, you should remove the Youtube link per WP:ELMINOFFICIAL as it is already linked from the Oprainfall website.--IDVtalk 21:26, 29 November 2016 (UTC)
 * All done, including the image. --ProtoDrake (talk) 21:34, 29 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Operation Rainfall is now a GA.--IDVtalk 21:40, 29 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Nice work on this. I've loosely watched over the article ever since I saved it from deletion years back. It's come a long ways - nice to see it as a GA rather than, you know, non-existent. Sergecross73   msg me  21:47, 29 November 2016 (UTC)