Talk:Oprah Winfrey/GA1

GA Review
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I am sorry to inform the editors of this article that I am failing it. The following is a list of some of the problems: I suggest getting a good copyeditor and a peer review before renomination. Nikki ♥  311  16:01, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Citation needed tags.
 * Short, stubby paragraphs.
 * There are quite a few sentences that could use a citation. For example: "In 1993, Winfrey hosted a rare prime-time interview with Michael Jackson which became the fourth most watched event in American television history as well as the most watched interview ever, with an audience of one hundred million."
 * Copyediting needed - there are sentences without periods, words that need to be capitalized, etc etc
 * Close friends has a quote that needs a citation
 * Almost every paragraph in the criticism section begins with a date. Mix it up. How about mentioning her crack smoking days!
 * A good number of the references need to be formatted with Template:cite web.