Talk:Orang-Outang, sive Homo Sylvestris

Peer Review by Paul Little
Hi Troy! This appears to be a newly created page. Firstly, I think that this is an excellent foundation for a great article. I'm certain that whatever suggestions I mention have already been thought of. I know that Dr. Stewart mentioned that he was especially fond of photos. If there are any additional pictures or diagrams that can be contributed, that would be helpful. Were there any pictures provided in the original text that can be found? Is there another source to be used to reference pictures? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Paullittle1979 (talk • contribs) 01:49, 19 November 2013 (UTC)

Your source material is full of detail. The challenge for you is filtering a massive amount of information and laying it out succinctly. Providing a few references among the items in the list would be nice. Overall, this is a great topic and is coming along really well. I think the only contributions I have as a peer reviewer is that you add some photos, some additional citations with page numbers, and perhaps flesh out a bit more content.

Excellent work, Troy! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Paullittle1979 (talk • contribs) 03:28, 19 November 2013 (UTC)

The below areas need to be fleshed out and completed. For the skeletal section:

Thorax
And a section on figures should be added.

Figures
Tyson's figures, to which he refers in the sections above, along with descriptions and commentary on the figures.