Talk:Orange County Business Journal

Article still needs work
I've cleaned it up a bit from the original, but there is still work to do.
 * Several sections are presumably sourced in the references but they need footnotes.
 * The article reads too much like a promotional piece. I'm tempted to simply delete the events, special publications, affiliations, and online media sections on WP:SOAP grounds.  What do other editors think?  davidwr/  (talk)/(contribs)/(e-mail)  20:20, 3 August 2007 (UTC)