Talk:Orchard Beach (Bronx)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 05:35, 9 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Opening for review. Courcelles (talk) 05:35, 9 August 2018 (UTC)


 * "destroyed two existing manors" How?  Were they city-owned or eminent domained?
 * I think they were city-owned since the city bought all the land for Pelham Bay Park in 1887. epicgenius (talk) 14:45, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
 * " It comprises the Bronx's only beach" is an awkward sentence.
 * Fixed.
 * Source 5 is dead, also, no need to shout.
 * Fixed, and also decapitalized the rest of the sources.
 * Otherwise I'm not seeing anything amiss. Courcelles (talk) 05:53, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I have addressed all the issues you mentioned above. epicgenius (talk) 14:45, 9 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 15:11, 9 August 2018 (UTC)