Talk:Order of battle of Battle of Wuhan

The name 立兵狄洲 should be pronounced Lipei, not Ryuhei, Ogisu. Lt.-Gen. Ogisu was the commanding officer of the Thirteenth Division, Second Army of Central China Expeditionary Force, Imperial Japanese Army. He was forced to retire following the Japanese army's defeat by the Soviet Red Army in the Battle of Nomohan, Mongolia, in 1938. 64.231.10.216 01:16, 13 July 2007 (UTC)Samu Takeshi, July 12, 2007

Assessment Commentary
I evaluated the article, and these are my comments for improvement: Boneyard90 (talk) 00:36, 30 December 2010 (UTC)
 * References: These appear sufficient, but the formatting appears inconsistent, and in-line citations are dead links.
 * Structure: Mostly ok, except there's new information in the "Notes" section. That information should be put in one of the above headings, or under a new heading.
 * Grammar and style: Mostly minor errors, especially in the paragraphs under "Notes".
 * Supporting materials: None present, though I'm not sure what to add. Check other "Order of battle" articles for suggestions or guidelines. Could be it doesn't need anything.