Talk:Oshima Brothers

Multiple issues tag
What about this article do you think justifies a multiple issues tag? Dugan Murphy (talk) 03:58, 6 May 2022 (UTC)


 * Maybe I was a little bit too harsh with the advert tag, but I did find some words that were a little POV:
 * "...by which time they boasted..."
 * "...their most ambitious tour..."
 * "...The more domestic brother..."
 * Also, most of the sources are primary or interviews, but that's hard to avoid with musicians. I'll take a stab at cleaning it up and I'll at least remove the advert tag.
 * Asparagusus (talk) 14:04, 6 May 2022 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the clarification and for your help improving the article! I see what you're saying with those POV examples. I reworded the ones you mentioned but hadn't yet fixed yourself, plus I reworded a few other phrases with POV in mind. Do you still feel the POV tag is necessary? And if so, what other examples do you see? Dugan Murphy (talk) 11:50, 7 May 2022 (UTC)


 * I forgot to ping you in my response 2 days ago. Please see above. Dugan Murphy (talk) 14:09, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for pinging me. I think it's removable now. I'll go ahead and do it.
 * ` Asparagusus  (interaction)  14:24, 9 May 2022 (UTC)