Talk:Oskar Sundqvist/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:54, 20 June 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  06:54, 20 June 2020 (UTC)

That should be it. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  08:42, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
 * "both their club youth and professional level" Plurals for level.✅
 * "Upon moving to North American" ✅
 * Lead should also mention what he did with the Pens before he got traded.✅
 * There's some stats from his youth career that is available on the Pens' news article for the draft.✅
 * Would it be better to use his player profile on hockeylegan.se to show his debut?✅
 * "Penguins fourth line" Penguins'? ✅
 * "Injured reserve list" should be in lowercase.✅
 * Ref 17 (TB recap) doesn't his debut, maybe find another source? ✅
 * This was ridiculously difficult to find.
 * Shouldn't "day" in the day with the cup be lowercase? ✅
 * Any details on his games with Pittsburgh in 2016-17? ✅
 * Might want to link Penalty (ice hockey) for penalty kill. ✅
 * "Washington Capitals Tom Wilson" Add "player" between the team and the player name.✅
 * Charging (ice hockey) would be a good link, and lowercase the only time mentioned.✅
 * Use Skellefteå for consistency.✅
 * If he had a large contribution for the Pens during 2015-16 season, shouldn't the 2016 Stanley Cup be added to the honors section?
 * Wasn't named on the Cup bc he didn't play enough games. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:57, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
 * , done! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 23:08, 24 June 2020 (UTC)