Talk:Oslo Metro rolling stock/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 02:23, 30 November 2009 (UTC) Comments: I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough4872 02:23, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) The lead needs propoer bolding.
 * 2) Combine the sentences "The T1000/T1300 and T2000 were built by Strømmens Værksted, with motors from Norsk Elektrisk & Brown Boveri (NEBB) and AEG, respectively. The MX3000 were built by Siemens."
 * 3) Remove the last two commas in the sentence "During the late 1970s, the western suburban lines, that were part of the tramway, needed new rolling stock."
 * 4) Citation needed for "The same year, the metro started operating all services through the city center, connecting the western and eastern networks."
 * 5) "The T1000 were built by Strømmens Værksted and are..." should be singular.
 * 6) Citation needed for "A three-car train is 54.14 meters (177 ft 7 in) long; the end cars are 18.11 meters (59 ft 5 in) long each, while the center car is 17.92 meters (58 ft 10 in) long. The cars are 3.16 meters (10 ft 4 in) wide and 3.68 meters (12.1 ft) tall. An empty three-car unit weighs 98 tonnes (96 LT; 108 ST), while it with full payload weighs 147 tonnes (145 LT; 162 ST)."
 * 7) Citation needed for "Each car is equipped with four three-phase asynchronous 140-kilowatt (190 hp) motors, giving each three-car unit a power output of 1,680 kilowatts (2,250 hp)."
 * All done. Thanks for the review and sorry about the lack of references—I'm not quite sure how I managed to miss them. Arsenikk (talk)  17:27, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
 * I will pass the article. ---Dough4872 19:32, 30 November 2009 (UTC)