Talk:Osney Martínez/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 07:27, 29 January 2023 (UTC)

When an article has this few issues, it merits a quick pass where I make the copy changes! Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:53, 29 January 2023 (UTC)

Copy changes

 * Add comma after Martínez limited himself to local politics until 2009
 * Should "in as much" be "inasmuch"?
 * Martínez reproached the MNR, and was reincorporated into its ranks Remove this comma (CinS). Also seems like reproached is not the right word in English; it would be the opposite. Maybe reapproached (which is what I tried)

Sourcing and spot checks
Earwig turns up no issues.


 * 2: Gonzales Salas p. 29 checks out for all three claims it's used for. ✅
 * 9: esa actitud es calificada por sus disidentes como “funcional” al partido de gobierno. ✅
 * 10 La diputada Piérola, por su parte, mostró su disgusto ante estas designaciones, debido a que la “otra corriente” de CN en Diputados la designó a ella como su jefa de bancada. ✅
 * 16: It took a bit of poking around to figure out what was being said here, but I finally was able to piece it together in the source. Not terribly intuitive. ✅
 * 19: Percentage is correct. ✅

Images
Just one, the CC-licensed headshot.