Talk:Otis (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 17:37, 25 June 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * Fix issues with image, according to the image talk page

Lead
Both have been done.
 * Fix disambiguation issue with "posthumous" according to this

Done
 * "Otis" is a song by American hip hop artists Kanye West and Jay-Z, from their first collaborative album Watch the Throne. → Put year in parentheses for album

Done
 * The track was released as the second single off of Watch the Throne on July 20th, 2011. → Get rid of "th" in "July 20th, 2011"

Background and release

 * No issues

Composition
New sample added
 * According to [{WP:SAMPLE]], audio recordings have to be 10% or less than the original recording (it needs to be 18.1 seconds or less and is currently 30 seconds)

Done
 * "Otis" is 2:58 long and is a mid-tempo hip-hop song.[8] → Change "2:58" to "two minutes and fifty-eight seconds"

Critical reception

 * No issues

Remixes
Done
 * Fix disambiguation issue with "DMX" according to this

Music video

 * No issues

Live performances

 * No issues

Chart performance

 * No issues

Charts

 * No issues