Talk:Ottoman ironclad Iclaliye/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 12:08, 12 April 2017 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  12:08, 12 April 2017 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅


 * No Copyvio ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Dead links ✅

Prose suggestions

 * "The design for Iclaliye was based on the earlier Asar-i Şevket-class ironclads built in France, though she carried a slightly more powerful armament consisting of two 228 mm" Perhaps "which were built in France" would work better.
 * How about "that had been built..." instead? Parsecboy (talk) 12:02, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Sounds good. Passing now. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  12:03, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
 * That's all my suggestions. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  01:38, 17 April 2017 (UTC)