Talk:Ottoman ironclad Muin-i Zafer/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 14:37, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:37, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
 * No DABs, external link OK
 * Image appropriately licensed.
 * Add location of builder to infobox
 * Done
 * Put lpp in infobox inside parentheses marks
 * Done
 * Abbreviate indicated horsepower in the infobox
 * Done
 * Watch rounding errors
 * Think I've got them
 * The belt .6 m (2 ft) above the line and 1.2 m (4 ft) below, Missing a verb, I think. This may be a problem in your other Turkish ironclad articles as well. Probably best to put a zero in front of that .6 as well.
 * Good catch - will look at the rest of them too.
 * Hobart Pasha took the fleet to the western Black Sea, where he was able to make a more aggressive use of it to support the Ottoman forces battling the Russians in the Caucasus. don't you mean eastern here?
 * Indeed I do.
 * At the start of the Greco-Turkish War in February 1897, the Ottomans inspected the fleet and found that almost all of the vessels, including Avnillah, Copy-paste mistake?
 * Yup
 * Ampersand in Refs for Greene--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:58, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Added. Parsecboy (talk) 15:32, 17 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Virtually certain that the guns aboard were 9 inch, not 9.1.
 * Fixed
 * And in the infobox?
 * Done.
 * 76 mm (3 in) thick transverse Need the hyphen in the middle here. Use 24 ft --Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:50, 17 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Are you sure about the code? I can't get it to work.
 * Actually I think it's because it's abbreviated; only works if the unit is spelled out, so nevermind.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:13, 17 March 2017 (UTC)
 * That would do it. Parsecboy (talk) 18:18, 17 March 2017 (UTC)