Talk:Ottoman ironclad Mukaddeme-i Hayir/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 14:37, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:37, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
 * No DABs
 * Image appropriately licensed.
 * Link engine type in the infobox
 * Done
 * Tell the reader 4 x 229 mm (what?) in the infobox
 * Done
 * The ship saw action during the Russo-Turkish War of 1877–1878, but was laid up from 1878 to 1897, when at the start of the Greco-Turkish War the Ottoman Navy mobilized Mukaddeme-I Hayir and the rest of the ironclad fleet and found almost all of the ships to be in unusable condition. A little long, I think. Suggest breaking it in half.
 * Done
 * single horizontal compound engine Tell the reader that it's a steam engine
 * Done
 * 222 mm (8.7 in) typo? smoothbore or rifled?
 * Must be a typo in L&G, as that's what they have.
 * 222 mm of iron plating typo?
 * Same as above
 * outbreak of World War I in 1914 she comma after 1914
 * Fixed. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 11:55, 27 March 2017 (UTC)