Talk:Our Lady of Mount Carmel Parish (Wyandotte, Michigan)

This article violates a neutral point of view. For example "beautiful" is not a descriptive word when describing the "Detroit River." This article uses vague words, such as "grew and grew" when specific numbers would be more appropriate. This article uses incorrect grammar, such as a pronoun not agreeing in number with its reference, such as "their rich Polish heritage" and "their schools" which refer to a singular noun, "parish." While a sympathetic attitude is acceptable, although not preferred, I hope the author would rewrite this article to eliminate bias, vagueness, correct grammar, and present a descriptive article.


 * Tagged — correct in all points: this articel is so skewed that it is almost impossible to not believe that it's a copyright violation. 68.39.174.238 19:15, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Proposed merge
I've suggested that Our Lady of Mount Carmel Cemetery (Wyandotte, Michigan) be merged with this article since it seems unlikely it can be expanded significantly to meet WP:NOTABILITY. Gwinva 06:53, 17 October 2007 (UTC)