Talk:Ours (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sebbirrrr (talk · contribs) 16:39, 7 September 2022 (UTC)

Hi, I'll leave comments soon! Sebbirrrr (talk) 16:39, 7 September 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Short description is already generated by the infobox so the template isn't needed
 * The templates in the infobox could be removed
 * Shouldn't it be Speak Now (Deluxe)?
 * Because it was promoted as a single from Speak Now (without the "Deluxe" part), I think it's safe to keep it that way.
 * Fair enough. Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)


 * "not as outstanding" → outstanding should be replaced per MOS:PUFFERY


 * Link Platinum to RIAA Certification

✅ Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
 * "with intricate lyrical details" → from the way it's written it sounds like the critics complimented the song with "intricate lyrical details"

Background and composition

 * Wal-Mart → Walmart


 * "as part of Swift's live album, Speak Now World Tour – Live" → seems like WP:OR, unless the CD single proves that?
 * The information was added back in 2011, so I AGD'd on that one... Apparently it can be verified on Discogs, but it is unreliable.
 * I just checked the CD images and the bit about the tour isn't mention anywhere so I recommend removing it. Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)


 * Didn't Carlson also produce the song?

Critical reception

 * This section could be renamed to just Reception as the commercial performance section is relatively short and could be inserted here
 * "gave the song a four-and-a-half out of five stars" → "gave the song four-and-a-half out of five stars", but I don't see a star rating in the source's current state, but it appears on this archive link https://web.archive.org/web/20120327014258/http://tasteofcountry.com/taylor-swift-ours/
 * ✅ thank you!
 * No problem! Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)


 * The All Access review isn't given by the source
 * Added another archive-url
 * Yep that's good. Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)


 * "he wrote" → "she wrote"


 * "as mawkish" → "as "mawkish" "

✅ Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)

Commercial performance

 * See above
 * "After its digital release in November 2011 "Ours" debuted at number 13" → I believe it's WP:OR as it's not mentioned by the source
 * The source says, "Taylor Swift debuts ... at Nos. 13 and 26 on the Hot 100 with "Ours" (148,000; her next country radio single) and "Superman" (91,000), respectively. [...] The tracks made their digital retail debuts Nov. 8, after previously being available only on the deluxe CD version of Swift's "Speak Now" album at Target stores."
 * My bad I somehow missed that. Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)


 * Capitalize platinum and link it to RIAA Certification


 * Include Australia in the previous sentence as the first country

✅ Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)

Accolades

 * Fine.

Live performances and music video

 * "dressed in tennis shoes and messy hair" → "donning tennis shoes and messy hair" as that would imply she is only dressed in those two


 * "The video spent seven weeks at number one on CMT" → I'm not sure if this is worth including, doesn't it fall under WP:SINGLEVENDOR?
 * I think it can be included, because "some network charts may fulfill other NMUSIC criteria instead"; and given CMT's prominence in country music, seven weeks at No. 1 is pretty notable to me.
 * Sounds good. Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)

✅ Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

 * Not sure what "national" is supposed to refer to.

✅ Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)

Charts
✅ Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Should be formatted accordingly so that the year-end charts appear on the right.

Certifications
✅ Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Ref 27 should be added here and the no. of sales should be changed to 1,500,000

Release history

 * Format → Format(s)
 * Given that all entries are singular, I think "Format" suffices
 * Understandable. Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)


 * Big Machine Records → Big Machine

✅ Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)

Outcome

 * for 7 days. Article looking good overall, just needs a few fixes! Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:40, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review. I have addressed your concerns above. Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 13:08, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Great work! I did some minor editing and left a comment about the CD single. Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:55, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks! I removed the claim that it was released alongside the album and kept the release date. I also added an Amazon ref to back it up :) Ippantekina (talk) 02:28, 10 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Everything looks fine now! Sebbirrrr (talk) 08:28, 10 September 2022 (UTC)