Talk:OutRun Online Arcade/GA1

GA Review
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Review in process...


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

I'm putting this on hold for one very minor prose change and one source:
 * In the third paragraph of Gameplay references "the passenger", as if that gameplay element had already been established. Is Heart Attack the only mode with a passenger?  I think it would read better as something along the lines of:
 * "In addition to attempting to complete certain stages, a passenger riding in the player's vehicle will frequently request certain stunts and actions."


 * As far as I know there's not yet been any consensus on using Siliconera (reference 6) as a reliable source.

Reviewer: gakon5 (talk / contribs) 17:46, 3 December 2010 (UTC)


 * I've made the requested changes. Both the prose and the reference were easy to replace. --Teancum (talk) 18:49, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Cool, cool. Passed then. --gakon5 (talk / contribs) 20:05, 3 December 2010 (UTC)