Talk:Out of Mind (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Azealia911 (talk · contribs) 13:08, 8 January 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I'm Azealia911 and I'll be reviewing this good article nomination. I'll be posting my review soon.  Azealia 911  talk  13:08, 8 January 2016 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * The "(EP)" is unnecessary. ✅

Background and release

 * "Mark Savage of BBC News" → "Mark Savage of the BBC" we tend to just refer to it as the BBC here in the UK.✅
 * Per WP:NFCC #8, any non-free content should only be used if it helps readers significantly understand the topic better. Please explain how the sound clip is vital to the articles context.✅

Reception

 * "alongside "Habits"" link "Habits"✅
 * "Mark Savage of BBC News" → "Mark Savage of the BBC" same as above.✅

Music video

 * Per WP:NFCC #8, any non-free content should only be used if it helps readers significantly understand the topic better. Please explain how the music video still is vital to the articles context.✅
 * "the singer" → "Lo"✅
 * "recording the music video" do you record a music video? Perhaps 'filming' would be more appropriate here.✅
 * "Öhman, member of" → "Öhman, a member of"✅
 * The abbreviation PLS isn't mentioned in the article it's linked to.✅

Live performances

 * Unlink radio station.✅
 * "She performed it later" → "She later performed it"✅
 * The article that Radio Xtremellä links to doesn't mention "Radio Xtremellä" once. Is it a fan name?✅

Track listing

 * This section is kinda unnecessary, if there were multiple formats and versions of the release (CD single, remix EP's) then this would suffice, but there's no point in the section when there's just one single digital download.✅

Charts

 * Is there no singlechart template for the Finnish airplay chart?✅
 * No need for the table to be sortable when there's only one listing.✅

Release history

 * Was the song only released as a single in these three countries? The problem with the releases is that, perhaps it is available in some countries (Belgium, Spain, Netherlands, France and Portugal) the release date mentioned in all the cited links (1 January 2013) is not correct. I don't know if I can do something with that.