Talk:Outside (Burna Boy album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 16:03, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Infobox
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 * Recorded: 2017 → no source?
 * Producers → add I Am Beats (put them in alphabetic order)

Lead
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 * extended play (EP) Redemption (2016). → extended play Redemption (2016).
 * The album received critical acclaim → give examples

Background
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 * Described as a mixtape, → Described by the Burna Boy as a mixtape,
 * The album's opener "More Life" was one of five songs recorded for Drake's playlist of the same name.[2] It made the cut, appearing on the outro of "Get It Together". → The album's opener, "More Life", was one of five songs recorded for Drake's playlist of the same name, released on March 18, 2017. However, it was only featured on the outro of More Life's track "Get It Together".

Composition

 * interlude "More Life", → not on source or tracklist
 * of relaxation. In the → of relaxation and in the
 * drums. The Lily Allen-assisted track → drums, while the Lily Allen-assisted track
 * ✅. I added the source that called "More Life" an interlude; since I merged some of content from the singles section into this section, the third bullet point couldn't be done.

Singles

 * You can merge this section partially with the compostion one.
 * Move the descrption of the songs (sound and lyrics) to the above section, leave the rest here.
 * On top of that, "Rock Your Body" doesn't seem to have been the first single. The tooexclusive source doesn't state that and Spin doesn't take it into consideration.
 * Leave the video specifics here.
 * I revamped the section. I replaced the TooXclusive source with an iTunes source. The song did appear on the album and was previously released.

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Critical reception
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 * Retitle the section → "Reception"

Accolades

 * The album received critical acclaim and was → stated above, remove "It was..."
 * In February 2018, Outside debuted at number three on the Billboard Reggae Albums chart → this is not an acollade move it to the section above
 * Let's get ride of the collum and use it all on the prose, not those many accolades.
 * I reworded the first sentence in this section and removed the table all together. I also removed the statement about the album charting on Billboard; there's already a chart section in the article.
 * There is a chart section? Where? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:09, 15 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Right below personnel
 * It needs to be written, the table is not enough. Anyway, I have done it. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:39, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

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Track listing

 * Fine

Personnel
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 * Use so there is the right space between the credits and the personnel.
 * Two collums are enough

Charts

 * Fine

Release history
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 * The reference should be aligned

Overall

 * You can now address the comments. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:29, 15 April 2020 (UTC)