Talk:Outta My Head (Leona Lewis song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jivesh boodhun (talk · contribs) 17:23, 23 June 2013 (UTC)


 * with production done by the latter two - Hmm, care to replaced with a better word?
 * It is an electropop and Eurodance song, and its compositional structure noticeably different from the other songs on Echo - Something is missing here?
 * for a duration of three minutes and 39 seconds - consistency when dealing with numbers should be applied
 * zero-nine are written out, 10 and above numerically. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   18:16, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
 * UK - first occurrence, so use United Kingdom
 * The instrumentation of "Outta My Head" is different to the rest of the songs on Echo and does not follow the same styles of production - what actually does not follow the same style? The instrumentation or the song?
 * All they other songs are low to mid tempo ballads. This song is very electro, dance and upbeat, the only one like it on the album. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   18:39, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
 * The lyrics of the song contain a "F**k you!" sentiment. - I am not sure about the utility of this sentence? Perhaps it needs an attribution.
 * up-tempo - isn't it uptempo?
 * The Independant - Something wrong here
 * ? —  AARON  &bull; TALK   18:39, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Micahel Cragg - Same here

Please have a look at the references. There are quite a few issues. Everything else seems fine. A music sample would be great, preferably the chorus which seemingly received much praise from critics.


 * On hold Jivesh 1205 (Talk) 17:38, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Done all. Thanks. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   18:39, 23 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Passing. Jivesh 1205 (Talk) 03:59, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   10:19, 24 June 2013 (UTC)