Talk:Ouw Peh Tjoa/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 01:21, 20 October 2013 (UTC)

Hey Crisco, I'll be glad to take this one. Comments to follow in the next hour or so, hopefully. Thanks in advance for the work on it -- Khazar2 (talk) 01:21, 20 October 2013 (UTC)


 * "a named " -- a man named?
 * D'oh. Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:03, 20 October 2013 (UTC)


 * "silat" -- might be worth a quick definition for non-Indonesian readers ("the martial art silat")
 * Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:03, 20 October 2013 (UTC)


 * focussing-- would be "focusing" in American English, but I'm not sure about British English, which I assume is desired here
 * Correct in BrE (example). — Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:03, 20 October 2013 (UTC)


 * "This plot is adapted from Filmindonesia.or.id" -- should this say something like "this plot summary"? I assume the plot itself wasn't derived from the source at the website. -- Khazar2 (talk) 01:31, 20 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Right, fixed. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:03, 20 October 2013 (UTC)

Checklist
Overall this looks like your usual excellent contribution--just a few tweaks I need your help with, above, and this is all set to go. Cheers -- Khazar2 (talk) 01:43, 20 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:12, 20 October 2013 (UTC)