Talk:Over (Lindsay Lohan song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 18:27, 2 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Over is a song by American singer-songwriter and actress Lindsay Lohan ---> The song name should be in quotes
 * The song was written by Lohan along with the song's producers Kara DioGuardi, and John Shanks
 * Stylistic, "Over" is about how her boyfriend will not commit ---> What? Did you mean Lyrically?
 * Critically, "Over" received positive reviews from music critics, who called it "catchy". Commercially, "Over" achieved moderate commercial success worldwide ---> Ok you really need to rephrase these double repeating opening lines
 * with the former also providing bass, guitar, keyboards, and audio mixing ---> with the former playing the bass, guitar, keyboards, and doing the audio mixing, while the latter provided background vocals for the song
 * Lohan's voice spanning from C4 to C5 ---> Lohan's voice spanning from C4 to C5
 * You don't need the two subsections in the reception section
 * In the United States, the song reached on Billboard??'?s Bubbling Under Hot 100 Singles for three weeks--> In the United States, the song reached on Billboard??'?s Bubbling Under Hot 100 Singles chart for three weeks
 * Credits and personnel require en-dash
 * Ref 10 for UK Singles chart does not work
 * Correct other references per Checklinks

Onhold for seven days. —Indian: BIO [ ChitChat  ] 14:14, 3 June 2015 (UTC)


 * All done. Alex talk page! 05:30, 4 June 2015 (UTC)
 * We are good to go Alex. —Indian: BIO [ ChitChat  ] 05:36, 4 June 2015 (UTC)