Talk:Ownership (psychology)

Lists
This is a very comprehensive article with excellent sources! Nice work.

Something that does need to be worked on a little, is the style of writing: it is too concise and list-like. You need less lists and more prose, per WP:EMBED. Good luck with it!-- Farang Rak Tham   (Talk) 09:06, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
 * No response yet. I am pinging -- Farang Rak Tham   (Talk) 22:44, 4 March 2019 (UTC)

An outline not an article
With all the sources cited, there must be something more to say within each section. For me, it is not ready for a GA review and the lack of activity indicates others agree.--WriterArtistDC (talk) 02:56, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
 * I understand now, the nominator and effective author (adding most of the content) was a student editor in an undergrad psych class at UCLA in Fall 2018. Its a nice literature review of the topic.--WriterArtistDC (talk) 03:05, 11 June 2019 (UTC)