Talk:Pádraig Amond/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

Going to review. MWright96 (talk) 10:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "but never made a first-team start for the club and moved to English League Two club Accrington Stanley," - team for less mention of the word club in the same sentence.  - Done
 * "he enjoyed the most prolific season of his career after scoring 30 league goals in the National League, as he helped Grimsby achieve promotion" - by scoring 30 league goals in the National League, as he helped the team achieve promotion - Done

Shamrock Rovers

 * "Amond joined Kildare County on a season long" - season-long - Done
 * "On 8 June 2008, he scored the first goal of the 2–1 victory" - of a - Done

Sligo Rovers

 * "He also played three matches and scored five goals as part of the team" - change "team" to squad for variety  - Done
 * "he scored Sligo's fourth goal in a 4–1 victory over St Patrick's Athletic shooting past" - a comma is needed before the word "shooting" - Done

Paços de Ferreira

 * All mentions of Pacos should have the character ç in them - Done
 * "he came on as a sub in the 87th minute" - substitute - Done
 * "but with all of them coming from the substitutes bench it meant that the forward played just under 300 minutes in total." - better: but with all of them coming from the subsitutes' bench, it meant he played a total of just under 300 minutes. - Done

Accrington Stanley

 * "he scored his first league goal for the club, an equaliser to make it a 2–2 draw at Plymouth Argyle, a 67th-minute header from a corner at close range." - a 67th-minute header from a close range header to equalise 2–2 against Plymough Argyle. - Done

Morecambe

 * "a left footed volley from 15 yards out past Luke McCormick seven minutes from time to give the Shrimps their first win over Argyle in the Football League." - better: a left-footed volley from 15 yd out past Luke McCormick seven minutes from time to give Morecame their first Football League win over Argyle.  - Done
 * "home from the centre of the box Sampson's left-wing cross, which flashed past visiting keeper Tommy Lee" - striker Jack Sampson's left-wing cross, which flew past visiting keeper Tommy Lee - Done
 * "Amond then dispatched the penalty to put them 2–0 up"- how about ahead?
 * Wikilink Football League Trophy to 2014–15 Football League Trophy.  - Done
 * You don't need to wikilink Jack Sampson after the first mention of his name - Done

Grimsby Town

 * "scoring the opener just on 3 minutes when Nathan Arnold chested a cross into the path of Amond" - scoring the opener three minutes when when Nathan Arnold chested a cross into Amond's path - Done
 * "he scored the 3rd goal of the match on 25 minutes," - the match's third goal on 25 minutes, - Done
 * "when substitute Jon-Paul Pittman played a one-two with Amond" - maybe explain what a one-two means? - Done
 * "the two goals were his very first goals in any FA Cup competition." - his first goals in FA Cup competition. - Done
 * "His efforts over the season earned him a place in the 2015–16 National League team of the year and saw him named Grimsby's Player of the Year" - 2015–16 National League Team of the Year and was named Grimsby's Player of the Year. - Done

Hartlepool United

 * "he signed for League Two Hartlepool United" - League Two club Hartlepool United - done by Iggy the Swan
 * "and manager Harrison placed a phone call to Newport manager Michael Flynn" - telephoned - Done

Personal life

 * "Amond is a National Citizen Service (NCS) Ambassador for the 2016–17 season," - was a National Citizen Service ambassador for the 2016–17 season - Done