Talk:P. Kodanda Rao/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: DreamRimmer (talk · contribs) 17:58, 23 July 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one for you. Expect comments within a few days.  𝙳𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚖𝚁𝚒𝚖𝚖𝚎𝚛  𝚍𝚒𝚜𝚌𝚞𝚜𝚜  17:58, 23 July 2023 (UTC)


 * At first glance, I haven't seen anything amiss and am double-checking all of the additional points.  𝙳𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚖𝚁𝚒𝚖𝚖𝚎𝚛  𝚍𝚒𝚜𝚌𝚞𝚜𝚜  12:22, 24 July 2023 (UTC)

Career
In second paragraph's second line, please change He accompanied Sastri to the Round Table Conferences in London and in South Africa. to He accompanied Sastri to the Round Table Conferences in London and South Africa. (or simply remove the in from South Africa)

In second paragraph's fourth line, please change He was also the member of the Indian delegation to the Round Table Conferences between India and South Africa in 1926 and 1932. to He was also a member of the Indian delegation to the Round Table Conferences between India and South Africa in 1926 and 1932. (or simply alt the article with a)

In third paragraph's last line, please change In one of those letters Gandhi clarified the role of Henry David Thoreau in shaping Gandhi's views on Civil resistance. to In one of those letters, Gandhi clarified the role of Henry David Thoreau in shaping his views on Civil resistance.

The fourth paragraph of the career section had some grammar issues, so I fixed some. Please check, and if everything is okay, then replace it with the below paragraph.

Rao wrote extensively in various journals on topics relating to Indians overseas, emigration, and immigration, and Indian politics under British Rule. Writing in The New York Times in 1935, he decried the Government of India Act 1935 as limiting and preventing the country from moving towards freedom and a dominion status. He also wrote books including East vs West: Denial of Contrast, Culture Conflicts: Cause and Cure, and Foreign Friends of India's Freedom. Rao's book, Foreign Friends of India's Freedom, was a collection of broadcasts commissioned by the All India Radio on the 25th anniversary of India's independence. Rao was the recipient of the Sangeet Natak Akademi Award in 1963.

Why are there double and in the following paragraph? If it was left by mistake, then it should be corrected.

''Rao wrote extensively in various journals on topics relating to Indians overseas, emigration, and immigration, and Indian politics under the British Rule. ''

In the last paragraph of the career section: Please replace Rao also served on various governmental committees including serving on the Madhya Pradesh Prohibition Enquiry Committee (1951) set up by the Government of Madhya Pradesh. with Rao also served on various governmental committees, including the Madhya Pradesh Prohibition Enquiry Committee (1951), set up by the Government of Madhya Pradesh.
 * ✅. Thanks for the very detailed notes. Have covered all of them, I think. Ktin (talk) 01:35, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Personal life
First paragraph's last line read: He also dedicated his book Foreign friends of India's freedom to his wife.

Please add a comma after First paragraph's last line read: He also dedicated his book

Please fix book name: Foreign friends of India's freedom to  Foreign Friends of India's Freedom

Published works
Checked. all okay.