Talk:PKIDs

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Will including third-party sources do the work of avoiding an "overly promotional tone"? Or is the problem that the entry describes in too much detail the programs and resources of the organization?

Thanks, Joshriedel (talk) 20:32, 29 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Both. The article is a bit too detailed on the programs and such, thus coming across like a sales sheet or press release. Third-party refs from reliable sources are a big help. - Realkyhick (Talk to me) 21:05, 29 September 2008 (UTC)

Great, thanks! Joshriedel (talk) 21:10, 29 September 2008 (UTC)

I've begun inserting third-party sources into this entry. If anyone has suggestions on how to improve the entry, whether in terms of organization, content, sources, etc., please let me know.

Thanks, Joshriedel (talk) 00:18, 1 October 2008 (UTC)

Removed newsrelease tag after editing content of page and inserting third-party references. Joshriedel (talk) 18:04, 1 October 2008 (UTC)


 * OK, this is better. I think it's a keeper now. - Realkyhick (Talk to me) 18:23, 1 October 2008 (UTC)