Talk:PROFINET

Clean-up June 2008
There is no need to write every word in capital letters. Also there is no need to mention PROFINET as much as a buzz-word. Greetings from Germany --Biezl (talk) 19:13, 30 June 2008 (UTC)

Suggestions:
 * I agree with the above, a lot of annoying capitialization


 * "PROFINET uses TCP/IP and IT standards..."
 * can we link to TCP/IP? (well I see it is done below)
 * "IT standards" is vague... which ones? or explain later?


 *  "The PROFINET concept features a modular structure so that users can select the cascading functions themselves. They differ essentially because of ..." 
 * I don't know what "cascading functions" are
 * Not sure what "they" refers to
 * long-winded: "concept" and "essentially"
 * Suggest: "Profinet features a modular structure so that users can select functions themselves. The functions differ because of..."


 *  "In conjunction with PROFINET, the two perspectives PROFINET CBA and PROFINET IO exist. PROFINET CBA is suitable for the component-based communication via TCP/IP and PROFINET IO used for the real-time communication with real-time requirements in modular systems engineering." 
 * "In conjunction" doesn't make sense or is "wordy" or "long-winded"
 * "the two perspectives" also wordy
 * "component-based" no idea what it means really
 * Suggest: "Profinet has two versions: Profinet CBA and Profinet IO. Profinet CBA is suitable for component-based communication /still needs explanation/ and Profinet IO is used for real-time (RT) and isochronous real time (IRT) control applications.


 * "decentral periphery" -- not sure what this means -- de-centralized devices? remote IO? sounds like English As Second Language issue.


 * "The designations RT and IRT merely describe the real-time properties for the communication within PROFINET IO."
 * seems redundant


 *  "One component covers all mechanical, electrical and IT variables. The component can be generated using the standard programming tools." 
 * unclear
 * what are "the standard programming tools"?


 * The isochronous data exchange with PROFINET is defined in the isochronous real-time (IRT) concept. 


 * The proximity recognition and device replacement: All PROFINET field devices determine their neighbours.
 * very unclear


 * Due to the continuous further development of PROFINET, users are provided with a long-term perspective for the implementation of their automation tasks.
 * I could say this about any network, wordy again

Feldercarb (talk) 22:28, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

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