Talk:PS Lotta Bernard/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 12:20, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Seems like an interesting topic, will start soon. AryKun (talk) 12:20, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
 * "PS Lotta Bernard" → "The PS Lotta Bernard"
 * Perhaps link for PS?
 * Link sidewheel and barge.
 * If this is the Northern Transportation Company referenced, link it.
 * Use "the" before all uses of "Lotta Bernard".
 * See 's note below.


 * "she began to encounter a storm" → "she encountered a storm"
 * Link wreck.
 * Link for Official number?
 * Link piston, bore, and stroke.
 * Link stern and forward deck.
 * "S.W. Dorsey" → "S. W. Dorsey"
 * "daughter, and his own" → comma unnecessary
 * Flour and kegs don't need links.
 * Link bow anchor.
 * "shore, and one of the group died of exposure" → "and" seems like an inappropriate conjunction here, maybe "although" or something else might be better.
 * "had, passed" → "had passed,"
 * "As of 2020 the" → "As of 2020, the"
 * "The Great Lakes Shipwreck Preservation Society planned to search for her on June 27–28, 2020, and if not found, they planned to search for her on September 12–13." → "The Great Lakes Shipwreck Preservation Society planned to search for her from June 27–28, 2020, and if she was not found, again from September 12–13."
 * Not necessary, but alt text for both images would be nice.


 * Done. GreatLakesShips (talk) 22:08, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Nice, will be passing. AryKun (talk) 03:26, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Use of the definite article before a ship's name
See this discussion. The definite article is not required, but is accepted, unless the ship has an HM prefix. Kablammo (talk) 15:24, 17 January 2022 (UTC)