Talk:Pacific Pride

Tone of article
Hi there, I have added several wiki-links and reference citations to this article; however, I'm wondering if the tone of the article reads too much like an advertisement for the Pacific Pride company? What do other people think? Does the tone need to be changed and the article re-worded?Jihadcola (talk) 21:51, 22 May 2012 (UTC)Jihadcola