Talk:Pacific Salmon War/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 15:38, 4 July 2021 (UTC)

Happy to review the article.

Review
The article is generally is fine shape, and the comments that follow are about relatively minor issues that can easily be addressed.

Lead section

 * Unlink Canada; United States; Premier (MOS:OL).
 * Link Alaskan.
 * CFMETR needs to be written in full (the abbreviation can then follow).
 * Unlink Prince Rupert (duplicate link).
 * Done all above


 * The map lacks sources, what makes you think it is accurate?
 * Cross-referencing with others mostly, but removed because I can't find a great way to prove it's accurate.

1 Background

 * Consider linking Pacific salmon and International Pacific Salmon Fisheries Commission, even though they are linked in the lead section.
 * Replace year-to-year with ‘annually’?
 * fourteen or fifteen years is normally written ‘14 or 15 years’. (minor point)
 * Link migratory; spawning (Spawn (biology))..
 * Done all

2 Conflict

 * Amend Brian Tobin to ‘Tobin’ and unlink (it’s a duplicate link).
 * Twelve – ‘12’?
 * Who is Barbara Rothstein?
 * Unlink Fraser River; Minister of Fisheries (duplicate links).
 * the Canadians – Canada is better imo.
 * Link C$ (Canadian dollar); Native American tribes; torpedo.
 * the war was essentially ended – is ‘war’ a little strong-sounding here?
 * Done all

3 Resolution

 * Unlink sockeye salmon (duplicate link).
 * Move the link to chinook salmon to where it first occurs in the text.
 * I would amend Bill Clinton to ‘U.S. President Bill Clinton’, to be consistent.
 * Who are David Strangway and Jean Chrétien?
 * Done

4.1 Footnotes

 * Consider linking The Economist and other publications with their own article in Wikipedia.
 * Refs 2 and 6 seem to be identical, and would normally be amended using something like.
 * Consider using the template for Refs 7, 13, 19 and 21.
 * Ref 1(Restoring Fraser River Salmon) is in title case throughout.
 * According to MOS:FNNR, “Editors may use any citation method they choose, but it should be consistent within an article.” The style is prevalent, but Ref 1 provides complete, formatted details about the source.
 * Avoid purely numerical dates (e.g. (2020-02-01) in Ref 7).
 * think I got all this

4.2 Bibliography

 * Ref 1 has a location specified, so the sources in this section need locations too, for the sake of consistency.
 * Presumably Karol de Zwager Brown’s last name is de Zwager Brown, not Brown?
 * Done both, removed location

6 External links

 * This section appears to be empty, so the title can be removed.

On hold
I'm putting the article on hold for a week until 15 July 26 July to allow time for the issues raised to be addressed once you return from your wikibreak. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 17:52, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks,, I think I've addressed everything. Let me know if that's not the case. Eddie891 Talk Work 14:48, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
 * All good, now passing. Amitchell125 (talk) 19:31, 19 July 2021 (UTC)