Talk:Pacific electric ray/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sasata (talk) 00:02, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

Comments to follow tonight.


 * Not too much I comment about this one... looks pretty good already. Check my edits are ok
 * link substrate
 * Done


 * a prologue citation and possible link would be a nice touch, as well as for Gill's 1861 genus transfer
 * Refs added, couldn't find a link


 * "Over a thousand pulses may be produced in all, depending on the duration of the feeding process." unclear "feeding process"
 * Clarified


 * "Reported litter sizes range from 17 to 20; at least the number of ova increases with the size of the female." Not sure why "at least" is there?
 * In some species, the number of ova does not correspond closely to the number of young, so the correlation here between ova number and female size doesn't necessarily also mean a correlation between litter size and female size. I added a note so hopefully it's clearer now.


 * link Pacific Fisheries Management Council
 * Done


 * fix dabs to diurnal and endemic
 * Done

Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 01:57, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

Article meets all GA criteria: Sasata (talk) 02:15, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * Well written, complies with MoS.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c(OR):
 * Well-cited to reliable sources; some facts verified during review.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Similar in coverage to other other shark/stingray GAs.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Four images, all PD.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Thanks! -- Yzx (talk) 02:45, 1 April 2010 (UTC)