Talk:Paddy Finucane/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 01:00, 16 July 2016 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it well written?
 * A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
 * See below
 * B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
 * 1) Is it verifiable with no original research?
 * A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
 * B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons&mdash;science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:
 * C. It contains no original research:
 * D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
 * B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
 * 1) Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Looks pretty good to me
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
 * 1) Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Looks pretty good to me
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Looks pretty good to me

Some minor stuff: Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:00, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) "down wind" -> "downwind"
 * 2) "Spring" -> spring
 * 3) "Gazetted" -> "gazetted" (multiple times)
 * 4) "baled" -> "bailed" (multiple times)
 * 5) "caliber" -> "calibre"
 * 6) "sot" -> "shot"
 * 7) "602 squadron" -> "602 Squadron"
 * 8) "shoto" -> "Sholto" (multiple times)
 * 9) "610, 616 and 41 squadrons" -> "610, 616 and 41 Squadrons"
 * , It looks like your concerns have been addressed, not sure why the nominator hasn't responded to you to notify you of such, but, whatever. Mr rnddude (talk) 10:55, 30 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Passing article now. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:53, 31 July 2016 (UTC)