Talk:Page kidney

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 2 March 2021 and 26 March 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Walkermangin.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 02:02, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer-Review
Your page looks great overall! It was very easy to follow and used appropriate level language. One suggestion I have is to consider placing the "History" section as the very first heading/portion of the article, right before pathophysiology. It seemed out of place when it appeared at the end. I think putting it first would also be a good transition into the pathophysiology section since you also mention how only animal studies have been done. WhiteChocolateRaspberryTruffle (talk) 23:50, 23 March 2021 (UTC)