Talk:Pain in My Heart/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: What a pro. (talk · contribs) 05:00, 11 April 2012 (UTC)

Background

 * Guitarist Johnny Jenkins, who helped Redding winning on a talent contest at the Hillview Springs Social Club fifteen times in a row and similarly successfully at "The Teenage Party", left the band to become the featured artist with The Pinetoppers. ––> Guitarist Johnny Jenkins, who helped Redding win a talent contest at the Hillview Springs Social Club 15 times in row and also at the [whatever it is] "The Teenage Party", left the band to become a featured artist with [whoever they are] the Pinetoppers.
 * Done. The Pinetoppers were a plain band, so I did not filled the "whoever they are".
 * his second single, "Shout Bamalama" (a rewrite of "Gamma Lamma"), Who originally wrote "Gamma Lamma"?
 * That was Redding, written during a trip to Los Angeles. Done.
 * The first was "Hey Hey Baby", but studio chief Jim Stewart thought it sounded too much like Little Richard. What was the second? Also, link Little Richard.
 * The second was "These Arms of Mine". Linked Little Richard.

Recording and release

 * Put quotes around "These Arms of Mine" in the sample.
 * Done
 * In the 1963 session, "That's What My Heart Needs" and "Mary's Little Lamb" were recorded and cut in June 1963, the latter became one of the worst-selling singles by Redding. Semicolon after "1963".
 * Done
 * Some content here (i.e. second half of second paragraph, most of par. 3, middle of par. 4) should be put in a new "composition" section.
 * I prefer the current version. In recording sections you usually also describe the composition. Also it does not look good if I split it.-- GoP T C N 10:37, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Citation for album peak on Billboard Hot 100.
 * I added a general source in the Charts section

Reception

 * Add this review.
 * Done

Charts

 * You need to cite all of these. What a pro (talk, contribs) thinks that ohhhh, ohhh, woaaah-oh-oh-ohhhhh . 05:00, 11 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Done.. Thanks for the review! :)-- GoP T C N 10:48, 18 April 2012 (UTC)