Talk:Paint Drying/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Unexpectedlydian (talk · contribs) 21:50, 4 January 2023 (UTC)

Hello @LunaEatsTuna! I'm going to jump on this one. Comments to follow soon in the table below :)  Unexpected lydian♯4 talk‽  21:50, 4 January 2023 (UTC)


 * @LunaEatsTuna, hello again :) I've completed the initial review so will put the article on hold for now. Do let me know if you have any questions about my comments!  Unexpected lydian♯4 talk‽  22:02, 5 January 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review! I believe I have addressed everything you mentioned except the following three items. Regarding your first point on the infobox, I have removed his credit as writer and producer but believe the other three should suffice—director (self-explanatory), cinematographer (he did film it) and editor (he edited the final product together before submission). Most film articles I have looked at as examples for Paint Drying include such credits for independent filmmakers who did everything themselves. Plus it is still equally as informative IMO. I agree with your point regarding the writing and producing—the film has none nor has it been distributed elsewhere to justify the latter credit. Regarding the budget, I just added (Kickstarter) in small text which I think will be informative enough for the majority of readers? Finally, regarding your copyvio concerns with "Two BBFC examiners […]" I tried a few sentences but was embarrassingly unable to find a better alternative that looked good enough. The statement is pretty cut and dried after all. Could I trouble you with helping find a better sentence?—sorry.  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 23:39, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
 * @LunaEatsTuna Brilliant, thank you for responding so quickly! I will have a look at everything tomorrow and let you know how I get on.  Unexpected lydian♯4 talk‽  23:42, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi again :) I agree with your first two points above. Regarding your third point, I have reworded that sentence in the article. I'm happy to pass the article now, well done!  Unexpected lydian♯4 talk‽  20:02, 6 January 2023 (UTC)