Talk:Pakistan at the 2014 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:13, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Will review tonight. Courcelles (talk) 16:13, 22 July 2018 (UTC)


 * Wikilink Federation Internationale de Ski
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Controversy section could be folded into the background one, since now it appears last after we already know they did compete.
 * Good idea, done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "sending one male to compete in the giant slalom" Male strikes me as a strange word choice here.
 * Reworded  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "He had less than the maximum 140 points needed to qualify," Which he is meant here?
 * Clarified (though, technically both of them).  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Speaking of the above, if "he" didn't qualify, how did he, well, qualify if Pakistan had three who qualified?
 * Not sure if I cleared it up, but I added more information on the qualification.  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Your EL needs a new description, it is the IOC's page on Pakistan generally, not on just 2014.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

Nothing major. Courcelles (talk) 00:54, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Qualification makes more sense now. Passing. Courcelles (talk) 14:37, 24 July 2018 (UTC)