Talk:Pakistan at the 2018 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:30, 11 July 2018 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 08:30, 11 July 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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Background

 * Wikilink Naltar Valley and Ski Federation of Pakistan
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Add a link to 2010 Olympic Games that goes to 2010 Winter Olympics
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Link 1948 Games to 1948 Summer Olympics
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

Alpine skiing

 * Add a link to 2014 Winter Olympics in the words 2014 Olympics in Sochi
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "He said he was not able to train much in Pakistan due to lack of snow." - due to a lack of snow.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "Karim competed in the slalom event," - Karim also competed in the slalom event,
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

Cross-country skiing

 * The wikilink for Winter Olympics should be in the background section
 * Added  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "Human is Kirim' nephew." - Kirim's
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "Human is in the Pakistani army in addition to his participation on the national skiing team. The Ski Federation of Pakistan founded a school in his village, the same village Abbas is from. He began training internationally in 2010–2011." - Source?, also the last sentence here should read He began training internationally around 2010 and 2011. or something similar
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "the same village Abbas is from." - change the word in bold to place to avoid close repetition
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "For these Olympics, he spent time training in Turkey and Finland, along with some time he spent in Korea prior to the event." - change to For these Olympics, Human spent time training in Turkey and Finland, and also travelled to Korea prior to the event.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)