Talk:Pakrac clash/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 19:38, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:38, 30 June 2013 (UTC)


 * "of the units" should be deleted. twelve battalions adopting military organisation of the units
 * but "they" lacked weapons but the reserve force lacked weapons
 * Don't capitalize "police": Police station unopposed
 * A company of the "Omega" special police unit
 * Croatian special police "unit", Lučko
 * We already know that they're JNA units: Cokić authorised deployment of three JNA companies,[23] of the armoured battalion of the JNA 265th Mechanised
 * Please use title case in the English-language titles of your references.
 * Thank you for taking up this review. I think I addressed all of the above comments.--Tomobe03 (talk) 08:39, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
 * No DABs, duplicate links.
 * External links are good
 * NFU image has a good rationale.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:47, 2 July 2013 (UTC)