Talk:Palace Skateboards

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 8 January 2019 and 28 March 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Nignaco.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 02:03, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
Nice job on your article!

Content: All the context was neutral.

Sources: Reliable sources. Maybe try to paraphrase some of the quotations so there are not as many. Add source to "winning the title of 'European Skate Brand of the Year.'" Add sources to awards.

Structure: Really good lead at the beginning of the article. The structure looks good, I can see notes where you want to expand writing. Maybe add locations as its own heading if you are going to talk about more than one location.

Balance: Good overall balance.

Jhouse2 (talk) 22:19, 30 January 2019 (UTC)
 * thanks pal! Nignaco (talk) 01:27, 31 January 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review from Yuang Hu
Hey NJ!

You are doing great job on the Palace Skateboarding!

My first impression of the draft article is super organized. With summary, history, collabs, its role in pop culture, awards and all necessary sources. For a clothing or streetwear brand, I find basically everything I need to know here.

I'd like to see more about Palace collabs and what the collabs represent in the culture, or its significance. Stating these in a neutral approach will be a huge boost for the brand you are talking about.

Otherwise, there are some details that you can make some changes. Such as mentioning those celebrities, it's better you put their full names. For example, use Kanye West instead of Kanye.

In all, it's a really good draft! More polishments will make it good enough to post officially.

Realyuang (talk) 20:06, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

Feedback on article draft
Hi, as the others have said, great job on your article draft! I think some of your references are messed up, so try to fix that. Another thing to do is to add your article to relevent categories. Finally, after you publish your article, you might add links to your article on other pages to help readers (and other editors) find it. I'm really excited to see this continue to develop! Groceryheist (talk) 01:41, 6 February 2019 (UTC)

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The article is flagged as being written like an advertisement. I've made an effort to rewrite aspects, remove unnnecessary segments and delete external links which are not related to the topic.

I am new to Wikipedia and if would appreciate if someone else reviewed this to see if it is sufficient before removing the advertisement header. JuliusAlexander96 (talk) 14:45, 3 October 2023 (UTC)