Talk:Palestine at the 2016 Summer Paralympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 19:45, 1 November 2018 (UTC)


 * I"ll take these two. Courcelles (talk) 19:45, 1 November 2018 (UTC)


 * "Palestine sent one athlete to Rio de Janeiro shot put thrower Husam Azzam," You need at least one more comma here.
 * Does Palestine compete in the Olympics, as well? Since when?
 * "he won a medal each at the" Try "he won a medal at each of the"


 * Good work! Courcelles (talk) 19:54, 1 November 2018 (UTC)
 * All of the points have been actioned and I have also corrected another point that I noticed. MWright96 (talk) 12:02, 2 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Promoted. Courcelles is travelling (talk) 14:53, 2 November 2018 (UTC)