Talk:Palm Island, Aruba

Comment 1 (2008)
I was looking for information on Palm Island, as I shall be visiting it in December. However, all I found was this short entry, which appears to have been written by one of the employees of the island. Looking for other information on internte, I have been unable find anything that isn't an advertisment for this island as a water park / beach excursion. I've tried to correct the grammar mistakes and spelling (I've used British English, because I am British) in the corrections. The mistakes were spelling mistakes, and not a different form of dialect English. If anyone wants to have a go at improving this with more information etc, I'd be very grateful (I don't know how to edit other than for correcting texts I'm afraid.).Jayjase (talk) 22:47, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Comment 2 (2012)
Hi there, I have added internal (wiki) links to the article. I think that the article still needs to be re-written so that it sounds less commercial, also, the grammar isn't great. I will return to this article soon to do some more work on it.Jihadcola (talk) 21:15, 23 May 2012 (UTC)Jihadcola ps- The article could probably be expanded also, to provide a history of the island.And I can find the phone number i need it pleass!!! need to make a few renevesions